CaitE Baloney

Hi, First of all I would like to say that I really like the theme to this poem. It made me think about the person in the poem. I liked ...

I haven't had much experience with poetry but I am starting to enjoy it. Any critique would be great. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The wind

Hi, That was great. I really like how you went through the seasons and then the part about the space. My favorite stanza would have to be the second. Again ...

Nice job, I acually really like this in all its insane confusion. I didn't find anything to critique on though I am not very good at finding grammar mistakes. I ...

Hey, this was fairly good for a first post here. Since others have gone over the grammar I would like to add that the end is a bit abrupt. I ...

Thanks for the critique I haven't written much poetry. Cait

I wrote this for school but decided to post it on here to see what you guys think. ----------------------------------------------------- Like a sword splits through flesh, a sharp green stab The ...

Hi Very good start. Though I did think it was a bit confusing in the beginning. Overall however, you put a good voice into it and it was well written ...

That was really sad but great. I like the beginning and it didn't give away anything to soon. The ending was a bit quick, though I liked it. Keep up ...

I think that this was a very good piece. I especially like the ending. It shows how good a person you are. The writing itself was great. All I can ...

Wow, that was awesome. I really liked the fairy tail feel of the whole thing, you don't find stories like that very often. I guess that is all I have ...

Thank you all so much for the help. I really appreciate it. I am also glad that you like the story. well thanks again Cait

This is the first thing that i have written and probably needs a lot of work. thanks for reading. The suns light glanced through the curtains of her cabin window. ...

Wow, that was really great. I haven't read much about gypsies so it is nice to see something new. I think that you could use a few more details. You ...

Hi, I love this. It is short and to the point but still is really good. -Cait